Amazing Aliteration

Behind the three doors

             Behind door one

Is a peaceful world with lots of people. Play screaming, playing and having fun until…….

These people come with guns killing people wearing all black.

They killed my mother “NOOOOOOOOOO,” I scream. “You killed my mother!”“Hope you guys go to jail!”

Days after days I cry until my father gets home.

He was in a different country, but who cares.

He asked me what happened. I told him everything, he starts crying.

I start crying with him.

I ask him “when are we having the funeral?” he say’s

“probably next week friday, or the week after that”.

“We had the funeral.” I said a few word about my mum how she was so nice to me how she cared for me.

                Behind door two

As I was walking home from the mall.

I saw a creepy house from like, miles away.

As I walk pass the creepy house.

I hear screaming and yelling like someone was killing an lady.

I run straight home and tell mum.(My house was like 2 minutes away)

She quickly called the police and the ambulance.

The police asked me a lot of questions and my answers were no.

The police did not find out the person who killed the lady.

Couple of days later it was all over the news.

We did not know who killed the lady.

We found out who was the killer was it a lady or a man.

It was a 35 year old lady that had brown headed hair.

I could not believe that it was a lady.

I thought that is a man like her boyfriend.

                  Behind door three

Was a man who would come to my house every single day.

He would be so annoying why because he would ask me a lot of questions like.

How old are you?, What school do you go to?, When’s your birthday? And things like that.

But there was this one day he told me to come to the shops with him.

But we weren't going to the shop  he was taking me somewhere else. I was saying “Hey where are you taking me” He say’s “Shut up and walk” I try running away he pulled my jumper back I scream “Help me He’s kidnapping me” Someone comes and helps me he pulling me by my arm.

Other people call the police, I could hear the sirens.

They still fight over me.

Finally the police is here.

He gets arrested and I get taken home by the police.

My mum said that he’s not allowed back at my place and i’m not allowed to go to the shops by myself.

                             

                           

Muriwai Beach

As Room 20 were on the bus to Muriwai Beach we stopped at a very good looking rock.  The rock was BIG and HUGE. The rock was called the Gannet rock. The Gannet rock was full of Gannet birds, they looked so white and clean.

As we arrived to the beach we were just going over some rules and being sun smart.  After we were talking about sunsmart rules we went to go and look at the things that they use to rescue people.

As we went outside to go to the beach I went past some prickly grass rocky road and then finally hot black sand. The only reason why the black sand was hot is because black attracts the heat. When we get there we played some games the we were going to play in the cold water. When we jumped in the water the waves were so big I almost drowned a couple of times.

grand parents

A grandparent

Whenever I use to go to my nana and grampa’s house it’s always quiet.  When someone used to slam the door he would get angry. My grandpa gets angry  because he’s probably watching t.v news or reading his newspaper.My grandpa is always angry because he doesn't really like children that much because they make too much noise.

My nana sometimes gets angry if someone steals stuff or takes stuff without asking.My nana is always happy because  she likes having fun with us but my grandpa is always angry. My grandpa is always angry because he doesn't really like children that much because they make too much noise.

My Nana and grandpa lives where other old people live and stay at. My nana and grampa has a small house and sometimes my aunty goes and visits.

My nana is always happy because  she likes having fun with us but my grandpa is always angry. My grandpa is always angry because he doesn't really like children that much because they make too much noise.

My nana’s hair is black and white she has nice smooth and soft hair but my grandpa’s hair is plain white and hard.

My nana’s hair is black and white she has nice smooth and soft hair but my grandpa’s hair is plain white and hard.

all about me

Shar and sharnell

Here is my chapter book that I done with Miss Jhones.

 Chapter one Shar Hi my name is Shar and I am 6 years old I have one sister her name is Sharnell we both go to owairaka school I am in room 7. My birthday is in december the 11.

 Hi my name is Sharnell I am 9 years old I go to Owairaka school I have one sister.Her name is Shar she is so annoying.

 Chapter two Going to school Me and Shar jumped out of the car. I “say were late Shar hurry run wait we didn't say bye to mum”. Who cares we say bye to mum all the time. “Come on I say bye I already got my late ticket bye need to go to class”. What do we do at school Well me and Sharnell don’t play with each other we play with our own friend. If we don’t want to play with our friends we go and find each other. 

Chapter three What are our friends name Shar’s friends name’s Jessica Anna Lucy Sophie Elzibeth Rebecca Soup Ella I have two fiends their name is Anna but I don’t play with her Sharnell’s frieinds An Anna blue lol Liz Shater Lilly.

 Chapter four What do we play at home Well we have our own laptops so we just vs each other on this paper scissors rock game and sometimes we just go on any games when we get tired. We will somtimes we go to my cousins house to play with my older cousins or smaller cousin.

Pippa replie

Dear, Pippa Hi, My name is Sharlena I am nuien but I was born up in new zealand. MY birthday is in January 12 2006 . Now I’m going to start answering your questions. So what is my favorite animal is a Bunny,liger and a Kitty cat. In my spare time I like to play never ending tag, Dancing and singing.. I can play a marimba because, at our school we have a music room and we go every monday a week for an hour.. Well I use to have a puppy her name was chi chi but she ran away so I’m gonna ask my mum to buy me a bunny on my birthday since I like bunnies :D. I have 3 brothers and 2 sister Older sister is Jacinda.Mckayla,Cypress,Me Sharlena,Kingston and last but not least Dekovyn. I have 3 nephews and 1 niece that is due in december I was so happy that I have a niece in december. I live with my aunty my other aunty my mum my brother and his girlfriend, my sister and my nephew and my 5 cousins, we sometimes have arguments but we get back together as a family. My favorite song is Sorry by Justin Bieber and fight song Rachel Platten. Where abouts do you live? We don’t snow in new zealand do you snow in Canada? Do you support the silver ferns because I do? What school do you go to? How far do you live from your school? Do you have any friends? Do you have any nephews or nieces? What do you do at school? Who do you play with at school? What do you do at home? Who do you play with at home? What do you like playing? Do you have your hair up or down? Do you like your friends? What songs do you like? What Singer do you like?